Tuesday, May 23, 2017

I Started As Summoner In VRMMO (Novel): [My Comments/Reviews/Spoilers]

VRMMO Summoner Hajimemashita (Novel): [My Comments/Reviews/Spoilers]

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Status (of the novel): Ongoing
My Reading: Reading & On Hold
My Comments/Reviews/Spoilers are Based on: Web Novel up to: WN Ch 1-4 (Translated), Web Novel RAW Up to: WN Ch 146 (Google Translated)

Atmosphere: Light
Type of Game: VRMMO; Fantasy Magic and Sword World
World Setting (World/Backdrop Setting): Modern Earth (Real World), Fantasy Magic & Sword World (Game World)

Main Character: Male, Teenager. High School Student. Japanese Nationality (Real World)
Game Character: Human, Female
*Job Class: Summoner
MC Personality/Character: None. Beside knowing our MC like cute and fluffy thing, our MC don't show much personality and character.

My Comments/Reviews/Spoilers: Our MC (male) got force into playing a VRMMO game by his gamer (male) friend because he got an extra console for free as a beta tester. There when MC randomly created his game character, the game AI mistaken his gender and created the MC game character as female. Why didn't the MC deleted it and recreated his game character is a good question. Anyway our MC select "summoner" as his job class. Being ignorant and don't care when told so why summoner class is not well like, our MC just do his own thing. Our MC is a solo player and rarely met or see other player and/or NPC. The story mostly focus on our MC and his summon creature and leveling up and class up.

Story so far:
  • MC as a solo player. Capture, tame, and summon them. Summon creature get stronger.
  • 1st game event (battle between player), MC summoned rabbit got third place. A pervert won 1st place.
  • More solo playing and getting stronger. Exploring.
  • 2nd game event (city siege, player as defender), MC and summoned creature get 1st place. MC was told be in charge of POW NPC from winning game event. 
  • More solo playing and getting stronger. Exploring. Asking someone to create a house so MC can summon all his creature to come out in the game.
MC Summoned Creature:
  • Rabbit (Vanguard)
  • Owl (Scout & Support)
  • Goat (Defense)
  • Fairy (Magic attack & support)
  • Cat (Magic attack & buffer)
  • Fox (Magic attack & support)      
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I don't want bash this novel but it need more work in my opinion. Such as creating a personality for the MC beside looking like a pervert who like fluffy and cute things. Or more character (player or NPC) that talk to our MC. Or have a character stick around long enough around the MC to know about them. Beside this as the reader (me) who have read more then 100 plus chapter already know by now that the author/writer like rabbit because of the after note and extra holiday chapter that have nothing to do with the story point that out. Which in turn come to mind who the real MC? the rabbit or the player (MC) who summon it? Yeah that just stupid but you understand this question once you read the novel.   

Overall it an ok read but the novel need more work.

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